Short story about the parrot called quawker which I made in my leaf picture yesterday
From Aiden
Friday, 17 April 2020
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Hi Aiden,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your story about Quawker the parrot. I liked how you have used speech marks and how you say that Dr Moon "barked", that's a great descriptive word instead of "said". I feel like I can hear Dr Moon being snappy. I wonder if you can spot a word starting with "f" which needs it's spelling corrected?
Thanks for your post Aiden.
Mrs Hamilton
Hi Aiden,
ReplyDeletethis is a great story about your parrot. What does your parrot look like? What happens next in the story?
Miss Hart