Wednesday, 29 April 2020

All about Lipizzaner.

The horse that I'm writing about is a Lipizzaner.
Lipizzaners  change colour  as they get older.
Foals are dark when  they are born.
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Lipizzaner get  ridden on for dressage.
They get trained in Vienna.
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This horse eats hay and lives in a stable.
Horses and people can be friends but some can be dangerous.  
                                                                                                

Violet


1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Violet,

    you have done a great job of editing your work before publishing it. I like the picture you chose to go with your writing. Next time you could give a subtitle like what they look like or how we use them, instead of paragraph 2/3. Great work Violet.

    Miss Hart

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