Friday, 24 April 2020

Ellas ocean poem


2 comments:

  1. What great writing Ella, you have put a lot of effort into this, well done! I love the poem. Do you like the ocean?

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  2. Kia Ora Ella,

    well done Ella, you wrote a great poem. You have even included a little bit of rhyme - tails, snails, sea and me. It sounds like your under the sea place would be a great one to visit. What is your favourite part of the sea?

    Miss Hart

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