Wednesday, 22 April 2020

Pixie Rose: Story Luna

My cat name is Luna. My cat Luna was running around then my cat Luna decided to jump on a tree made of chocolate The problem that Luna faced was that she got stuck on the chocolate tree.
How Luna solved the problem was by calliing over the other cats to eat the chocolate and set Luna free.

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2 comments:

  1. Angela Hamilton22 April 2020 at 09:50

    Hi Pixie-Rose,

    I love this story and I can imagine what it might be like to be stuck in a chocolate tree. If it was me I might stay up there for a while and eat a few branches! I would like to read more of a description of what Luna looks like so I can picture her stuck up the tree. I can tell that she is playful and adventurous!

    Mrs Hamilton

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  2. Miss Hart22 April 2020 at 11:26

    Hi Pixie-Rose,

    this is a great story about Luna and her problem. You have followed the structure from our narrative last week. Could you draw a picture to show us what it looks like?

    Miss Hart

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