Thursday, 16 April 2020

Louis doing his writing

2 comments:

  1. Hi Louis,

    Well done, I can see you're concentrating hard on your writing and I loved how you've used the word "slithering" - very descriptive!
    I wonder what other animals you could find in your garden?

    Have a great day!

    Mrs Hamilton

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  2. Hi Louis it's Joseph. What is your story about is it good?

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