Thursday, 16 April 2020

Aidens Parrot


Today I Aiden went for a walk with my dad,
Mum, and kora down to a food forest where fruit
Grows . why i went was i wanted to collect
Leaves so i can make a parrot out of leaves.
We felt very very very very very very very cold
Outside because of the wind. We could see trees 
And  all the colored leaves


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2 comments:

  1. Miss Hart16 April 2020 at 11:17

    Hi Aiden,

    I love the colour of the leaves you chose and the variety of the shapes. It certainly looks like a parrot flying. I like how you described how you felt when you collected the leaves. Next time try use your other senses to describe you parrot (see, hear, taste and smell).

    Kia pai tōu mahi

    Miss Hart

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  2. Angela Hamilton16 April 2020 at 11:45

    Hi Aiden,

    Your parrot is spectacular! The different colours are amazing. It definitely has been much colder the last couple of days, but I bet Kora loved getting out in the forest. Next time don't forget capital letters for names and the beginning of sentences. I'm looking forward to seeing what you will write next!

    Take care Bailey family.

    Mrs Hamilton

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