Thursday, 16 April 2020
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Kia Ora Tristan,
ReplyDeleteWell done, I love the extra touch you gave your leaf animal with the eyes and the descriptive words you have used in your writing. For your next step you could add a simile using the words as or like to compare. For example: It feels super smooth like silk.
Keep it up,
Miss Esselink
Hi Tristan,
ReplyDeleteYour ant picture is very cool and I like how you have described it using your senses. I wonder what the ant might be doing during it's day, who might it meet? I look forward to seeing some more writing - well done.
Mrs Hamilton