Friday, 17 April 2020

Braxon's Writing

3 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Braxon,

    you wrote a good story about bees. What is your favourite thing about bees? I like that they pollinate flowers and crops of food for us to eat, they are also very cute.

    Miss Hart

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  2. Hi Braxon, great writing buddy. Well done on remembering your fullstops. The dog and Sophie are very lucky that the bee just flew away.

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  3. Hi Braxon,

    I like your story about the buzzy bee and your picture. Have you been stung by a bee before? My favourite thing about bees is honey and also the important job they do pollinating our plants.

    Mrs Hamilton

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