Once upon a time, there was a chipmunck called Nuts.
He is collecting nuts.
He is doing it in the forest.
I can hear him chipping on a nut.
I can smell his breath.
I can feel his soft back.
I can feel his fluffy tail.
The end.
Friday, 17 April 2020
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Kia Ora Violet,
ReplyDeleteI think you were creative in choosing a chipmunk for your animal. You did a great job following the description structure. Next time you could add more detail and tell me what the nuts and forest looked like.
Is the chipmunk your favourite animal?
Miss Hart
Hi Violet,
ReplyDeleteNuts looks like a happy chipmunk! I enjoyed your description, I wonder what his breath smelt like?
Mrs Hamilton