Friday, 17 April 2020

Ella's Writing




These are the leaves from my garden.  
I picked them this morning for my story and to help me learn.   
I can hear the crunching of the leaves when I pick them up.  
  I can see many colors like green and brown.   
I can smell the garden from the leaves like the grass.  
 I can touch the leaves and they feel rough. 
 I can taste winter coming. 

 By Ella Prendergast  
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2 comments:

  1. Miss Hart17 April 2020 at 14:44

    Kia Ora Ella,

    your leaf picture really looks like a turtle swimming through water. I like how you described the sound the leaves made as you picked them up and the smell of them. Did you enjoy making you leaf turtle?

    Miss Hart

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  2. Angela Hamilton20 April 2020 at 09:50

    Hi Ella,

    I really like your turtle and I also like how you have described the leaves using your senses. I feel like I can taste winter coming too on some of these cold mornings we have been having. I wonder where your turtle will swim to?

    Mrs Hamilton

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