Thursday, 26 March 2020

Xavier's six sentence story



1 comment:

  1. Hello Xavier,

    what a great, exciting adventure about Ninja's. I liked how they became friends at the end, it is always good to put our differences aside. Next time you could describe the setting (the forest) so I can imagine what it looks like in the story. Keep up the great work.

    Miss Hart

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