Six Sentence Story. By Aiden
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Title: attack of the upside down monster
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1. Once upon a time a tiny tiny tiny elf was sitting under his grandads
mushroom home ¨its time to go home ¨yelled his grandad so then walked home when he got home he was in for a big surprise ... |
2. The house was decorated with tiny little lights
¨ I forgot that it was christmas ¨ said the elf so then he went inside |
3. ¨ and now the christmas sword blogings to elf! ¨
¨yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ¨lets get this party started ! slp crunch crunch slp |
4. ¨Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh there's a fire in the kitchen
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5.¨ Sob Sob Sob sob sob sob sob¨are you all right elf ¨
never been sadder I think know has done this the fire lord |
6.now is the big battle so begin
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrjjjjjjjjjjgbvbjjjjjjjjjjjjfse ccccccccccccccccccccccccdjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjfgggggggggbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbewl ¨no no water please ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh¨ |
Hi Aiden,
ReplyDeleteI like how you ended your story on a cliffhanger, maybe you could write another story so we could read about what happens in the battle. I like how you've included speech marks to show when someone is talking, next time you might want to write who was talking.
Miss Hart