Thursday, 26 March 2020
Ella's Six Sentence Story
Once upon a time there was a mermaid called Summer She lived in a coral land with a thousand sisters. Summer had the power to make the ocean beautiful. But one day Summer could no longer make the ocean beautiful because humans were putting rubbish in the water. Summer has to see a King for a new power to make the ocean rubbish free and beautiful again. The king gave Summer this power and the ocean was beautiful and clean again.
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Kia Ora Ella,
ReplyDeletewhat an interesting topic to write about. I love how the mermaid cared for her environment, it reminds us to look after our own by not dropping rubbish and using less plastic. You wrote about a very important topic. Next time you could add more detail about what the coral lands looked like or Summer.
Rawe Ella!
Miss Hart