Thursday, 26 March 2020
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Hi Imogen,
ReplyDeleteyou've created the puppets just like we did in discovery. Rawe (excellent) you have put a lot of detail into both the puppets and drawing, it is easy to see which character is which in both. What is 'The Special Garden' about? Do you have your own special garden at home?
Miss Hart
My story is about a monster called Pop! He captures one of the puppet people called Jessie from her garden. Her friends rescue her by squirting Pop with the hose! Me and mummy have made a fairy garden in our garden, but I chose to write about a garden as I enjoyed the play we made in school about a garden!
DeleteHi Imogen,
DeletePop is a great name for a monster and what an exciting story you have made. With your puppets you could record yourself acting out the play, both Miss Esselink and myself would love to see that. Keep up the great mahi (work). I am very proud at the effort you are putting in.
Miss Hart